Thursday, February 11, 2010

through the silence of the night

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I trod along a slippery path in the darkness of night
the cold wind brushed across my face, making me shivered instantly
the eerie silent of the night hides thousand secrets
restless, I tilted my head to the left and right a couple of times
like a little girl trying to cross the street full with cars
although not visible to my naked eyes
I felt as if a dozen pair of eyes were staring at me through the blackness of the forest
I quickened my pace 
my eyes widened in fear
my breathing labored
I no longer trampled
I was running 
from the eyes that gazed through the trees that stood still
as I was running, deep and husky voices echoed in my mind
telling me to keep running until the end
to keep running away from everything
to just put an end to everything
I stopped abruptly and held the nearest tree I could find
my bare hands held tightly against the coarse skin of the tree
sweat streamed down my pale face as I gasped for air
the dusty air clogged my nose 
the strange and unfamiliar voice was still echoing in my head 
reiterating the same message
 my legs were shaking violently that they can no longer bear to stand up
I fell flat onto the surface of the earth
I embraced both my legs towards my quivering body
and rest my head on my knees
I could not bear the noises in my head
they were getting louder as minutes passed
the voices felt closed as if they were saying them right to my face
yet there were nobody there except for me
there were no sounds except for the sound of me breathing the musty air

silence

I slowly regained my strength
I summoned all the energies I have left to get back on the path and see what awaits for me at the end of the endless road
I dare not look back
fearing the eyes would slowly catch up with me
I stood there in the middle of the path of the unknown
staring blankly ahead
anticipating what might happen if I continued with journey
will I run again?
will I fall in the middle of the road?
will I be able to swallow the ending and the answer from this journey?
I do not know
for I have not yet reach the end of the road
my eyes blinked away the tears that almost fell onto the dirt
anxious, I walked tardily along the path

again, I trod through the darkness of night
in silent.

p/s : do you think this is creative enough?


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Thursday, February 11, 2010

through the silence of the night


I trod along a slippery path in the darkness of night
the cold wind brushed across my face, making me shivered instantly
the eerie silent of the night hides thousand secrets
restless, I tilted my head to the left and right a couple of times
like a little girl trying to cross the street full with cars
although not visible to my naked eyes
I felt as if a dozen pair of eyes were staring at me through the blackness of the forest
I quickened my pace 
my eyes widened in fear
my breathing labored
I no longer trampled
I was running 
from the eyes that gazed through the trees that stood still
as I was running, deep and husky voices echoed in my mind
telling me to keep running until the end
to keep running away from everything
to just put an end to everything
I stopped abruptly and held the nearest tree I could find
my bare hands held tightly against the coarse skin of the tree
sweat streamed down my pale face as I gasped for air
the dusty air clogged my nose 
the strange and unfamiliar voice was still echoing in my head 
reiterating the same message
 my legs were shaking violently that they can no longer bear to stand up
I fell flat onto the surface of the earth
I embraced both my legs towards my quivering body
and rest my head on my knees
I could not bear the noises in my head
they were getting louder as minutes passed
the voices felt closed as if they were saying them right to my face
yet there were nobody there except for me
there were no sounds except for the sound of me breathing the musty air

silence

I slowly regained my strength
I summoned all the energies I have left to get back on the path and see what awaits for me at the end of the endless road
I dare not look back
fearing the eyes would slowly catch up with me
I stood there in the middle of the path of the unknown
staring blankly ahead
anticipating what might happen if I continued with journey
will I run again?
will I fall in the middle of the road?
will I be able to swallow the ending and the answer from this journey?
I do not know
for I have not yet reach the end of the road
my eyes blinked away the tears that almost fell onto the dirt
anxious, I walked tardily along the path

again, I trod through the darkness of night
in silent.

p/s : do you think this is creative enough?


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